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If I won a trip to Hawaii, I really cannot imagine choosing anyone but my cousin Vera, as she is for me like the sister I never had. First of all I am an only child and I know Vera since her birth, which is the reason why she is not only like a sister for me, but also my best friend. We already know each other for almost 17 years and there is hardly ever a single day, where we do not meet us for a cup of coffee, a little chat or any other activity. One of her qualities I love the most, is her great humor, as I can laugh with her the entire day and no matter how sad I am, Vera will always make me smile. However it is not only her humorous side, which makes me admiring her, but also her trustworthy and helpful character, which makes it possible for me to tell her every little secret in my life. Moreover Vera is always on my side, supports me and never lets me down, as she is probably the most reliable and faithful person in the world. These are all reasons, why I would only take her with me to Hawaii, simply because she is the most important person of the world for me, I even might say, she is my soul mate. J

 

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